Tissa Godavitarne wrote:

Glad everyone likes it.

Tissa, I hate to be the wet blanket, but I have some issues with the video.  I don't like it.  There I said it.    Let's start with a basic question:  What is GVO?  If we're introducing prospects to GVO for the first time with this video they are left wondering what the heck GVO is until 7 minutes into it when you finally talk about how GVO's marketing tools are integrated into Acme People Search (and even that segment is a little vague).  You don't even mention GVO until 2 minutes into the video, and that's only after you've already talked about the Clickbank and GDI income streams.  Watch the video again and pretend that you've never heard of GVO before.  It just doesn't make much sense.

I'd like to see you start with a personal introduction followed by a strong introduction describing WHAT is Global Virtual Opportunities (GVO).  Perhaps talk about their service, the income opportunity, how they are an established company with a new opportunity, share your proof of earnings, etc.  Once you explain what GVO is then you can switch gears and talk about WHAT is Acme People Search and HOW it can help members earn income and build their business with GVO.

I hope I didn't hurt your feelings with my video review.  You do have a wonderful speaking voice!

Though I think we can do even better.  The text, video and links should remain, but who else thinks we can do better with the page design?  Maybe a contest of some sort where we vote on the best design.  Winner gets two free months of GVO (a $90 value).  Whadya say, all you design wizards out there?  My Web design skills suck.

Awesome idea!  I hope we start having more contests!

-Chris

P.S.  In the video you mention both Lewis and Keith on the GDI Leaderboard.  A new member hit the board this week.  Erika Moreno, who is one of Slaven's direct referrals, is having a phenomenal week.  I just got an e-mail from her.  Go Erika!

Tissa, I hate to be the wet blanket, but I have some issues with the video.  I don't like it.  There I said it.    Let's start with a basic question:  What is GVO?  If we're introducing prospects to GVO for the first time with this video they are left wondering what the heck GVO is until 7 minutes into it when you finally talk about how GVO's marketing tools are integrated into Acme People Search (and even that segment is a little vague).  You don't even mention GVO until 2 minutes into the video, and that's only after you've already talked about the Clickbank and GDI income streams.  Watch the video again and pretend that you've never heard of GVO before.  It just doesn't make much sense.

Awesome Tissa!

Am I the only one who noticed the disclaimer at the bottom:

REALITY CHECK: Just because I have earned over $7,000 from GVO doesn't mean you will earn over $7,000 from GVO.  YOUR level of success will depend on YOUR ability and willingness to LEARN. Start LEARNING and stop looking for get-rick-quick programs!

  meant rich .. eh?